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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2011-11-01 10:29 AM



you asked sometimes to let you hear it
when my hand made you more comfortable
in letting out the demon side of your nun
without her heavy rosary or sandal safety

you would climb onto chairs afterwards
in your shortest hem line suggestion
waiting for my eyes to touch you there
where you smiled and made those moan sounds

before looking for ladders into ever after
where dreams were freshly painted sticky
and you could get them all over your clothes
but then someone would notice your smile

and you would disrobe slowly before waking


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daark

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2011-11-01 10:51 AM


quote:
before looking for ladders into ever after



You serve your talent with honey-dripping words, that satiate the reader who looks for poetic gourmet originality.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2011-11-01 01:02 PM


Ms mar, you bless my humble pen ms, thanks
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