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0 posted 2011-10-31 04:27 AM


Sometime You


Somewhere in time and space
     I will be able to embrace
With the love in my heart for you
     Feelings that you know are true.
I will be there when you emit the tears
     Standing next to all your fears

I’ll be there for you

Time will pass, as you will see
     Knowing that it’s always me
There’s a moment that will come
     Your heart will beat the same drum
Even when you’re happy and full of cheer
     You will see that I’ll be near

I’ll be there for you

As our age becomes in time
     You will see my love still chimes
When our bodies are old and used
     Even when our minds confused
Promise of the hearts love made for two
     Stuck together just like old fashion glue

I’ll be there for you
.
.
.
Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2011-10-31 11:05 AM


I think this might be your very best... It's absolutely beautiful... and going into my library! *S*
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2 posted 2011-10-31 05:56 PM


thank you suthern

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3 posted 2011-11-04 10:37 PM


"As our age becomes in time
     You will see my love still chimes
When our bodies are old and used
     Even when our minds confused
Promise of the hearts love made for two
     Stuck together just like old fashion glue

I’ll be there for you"

Excellent write!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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4 posted 2011-11-06 03:21 AM


Thank you JL
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5 posted 2011-11-07 06:33 AM


beautifully expressed Bernie! a song in the making even! :-)

Bisous
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Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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6 posted 2011-11-08 05:38 AM


Thank you RDB
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7 posted 2011-11-10 01:03 AM


This is so sweet  -  gives me hope.

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8 posted 2011-11-10 11:31 AM


this is sweet bernie
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9 posted 2011-11-10 01:17 PM


A beautiful rendering of your emotion...  "stuck like glue" is a lovely place to be.

Nicely done.


Michael

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10 posted 2011-11-11 04:42 AM


thank you alison

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11 posted 2011-11-11 04:43 AM


thank you passing shadows and michael
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12 posted 2011-11-11 05:59 AM


Poignant, as it is soaked in heart's sincerity and beauty.

Margherita

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13 posted 2011-11-11 07:16 PM


thank you  Margherita
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