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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-30 10:13 PM




If I could upon your dreams be
memories massaging away
the aches of the day
Vanilla misted musk drifting
a smile in slumber kept
Resting gently
on lips so softly swept
Your worries to the moonlit wind
Float you down a lazy river
and around my bend
LGR(C)10/30/11



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-10-30 10:14 PM


You always have a way to express yourself. Very nice.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2011-10-30 10:18 PM


"massaging away the aches of the day", so comforting,
enjoyed, ms. e

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-10-30 10:19 PM


Thanks Jerry, I know I can always count on you!  

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-10-30 10:20 PM


Hey ms e! Good to see you, glad you like.

Lori

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2011-10-30 10:28 PM


Good to see you too Lori, I always enjoy your poems,
ms. e

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-10-30 11:08 PM


Hah! Yeah, you can always count on me, Lori, like a faithful old hound dog.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2011-10-31 06:23 AM


Hey Jerry, how'd you know I loved hound dogs!?
JL
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8 posted 2011-11-04 08:10 PM


Wow, if I could do a siren sound here, I would.
This is great.  Love the soft touch.



JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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