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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-10-29 08:32 PM


    

what a beautiful end
to a gorgeous October day
bright sunshine, nice stiff breeze
air so clean smelling
its almost as sweet as her perfume
this day is the perfect one
to come after our intermingling last night
so maybe there were problems
unforeseen, never mind last night
it was still, a night to remember for me
which brings me back to this breathtaking
October day
what more could a man ask for
a lovely woman
the way she makes me feel
and the beauty of today the exclamation point
to a just-what-the-doctor-ordered
weekend
I am blessed

©October 29, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-10-29 09:21 PM


Jerry! You lucky devil!

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2011-10-29 09:35 PM


After reading your happy thoughts which were very nice indeed, I had to ask:
was there a "pun" intended in the title???

Lol,

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-10-29 09:37 PM


Yes, I am, Lori, and thank you for thinking that.

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jwesley, you have a sharp mind. Thanks for being here .  .

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2011-10-30 01:53 AM


I think... we are all blessed by your beautiful inspirational words Jerry! :-)

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
5 posted 2011-10-30 07:28 AM


Roniece, it is I who is blessed for being around such beautiful people. Appreciate your input into my world.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

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