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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-29 06:41 PM



Of all the things I've tried to say
and never seem to say quite right
about how I feel about you
being my shining knight

Oh sure, your armor has
a few wrinkles
and the shine is a little gray
Still just the same
you know how
to save my day


LGR10/20/11


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-10-29 06:44 PM


Oh boy, some guy has come down with the big head if he reads this. You do know how to flatter a guy, Lori.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-10-29 06:46 PM


Yeah and you know, some guys just don't know how to take a compliment.   Thanks friend

Lori

JL
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3 posted 2011-10-29 07:14 PM


Very

Lori!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-10-29 09:19 PM


way cool with the graphics!
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5 posted 2011-10-30 08:04 PM


The imperfections in that armor just show he's survived a few dents... and isn't afraid to get a bit dirty defending his lady. *S*

This left me smiling!!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-10-30 09:00 PM


Exactly! Thanks!

Lori

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7 posted 2011-10-30 10:52 PM


It's nice to have a knight at night,
enjoyed, ms. e

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