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bslicker
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0 posted 2011-10-29 10:36 AM



The Dance


Fingertips touch
When music plays
Our feet move
Across the the floor
Floating upon clouds
As the breeze of us
Melt into the moment
Swiftly spinning around
With eyes veering thru
Though years apart
We have the dance
.
.
.
Bernie


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Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2011-10-29 11:21 AM


Having the dance is the thing, whether years apart or no. The dance floor is be the place where getting to know you takes on a whole 'nother meaning.

~*  The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon, but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes  ~*~

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2 posted 2011-10-29 03:24 PM


I agree with JP... having the dance is the important thing.  Don't let the world dissuade you from the beauty before you.


Michael

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3 posted 2011-10-30 08:02 PM


I can't put it better than Jerry and Michael have done... *S* Enjoyed the read!
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4 posted 2011-10-31 01:10 AM


Thank you Jerry, Michael, and Suthern

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