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abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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0 posted 2011-10-27 11:57 AM



~This was mostly written because of a friend of mine who has made it his goal to figure out what me and many of his other friends live for. Comments on how I can improve my writing are always appreciated.~

The reason I live
Eludes me as well

The reason I die
Can be told only by the lost

The lost and the weary
Understand my saddness

The sad and the broken
Know of my joy

The reason I live
Is for those I love

Those I cherish
Deep in my heart
Collecting forever
In my "book of life"

© Copyright 2011 Abigail Hurst - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-27 12:02 PM


Not too difficult to understand what you live for. But then, maybe I don't know the back story.

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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2 posted 2011-10-28 01:03 PM


I'm the type of person who shows nothing. =P That's the background. The horrid part was he was looking over my shoulder without me knowing.
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