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Open Poetry #47

Not One Wit

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-10-26 08:45 PM

Not one wit
nor an iota
of good
will it do
to try
to fill
this whole
with something
outside myself
I see
lust and gluttony
'neath my dimples
all for naught
against this
naked space
that love thyself
would have me fill

LGR(C)108/26/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-26 09:06 PM

Whoa!!!!! I sense differences of opinions maybe . . . er . . . Don't know how to continue, and so I shan't (love that word). Except to say, whoaaaa!!!

~* If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-10-26 09:39 PM

Nope, get 'er a goin'! Keep 'er commin', I feel good about me! Who wouldn't feel good with a friend like you Jerry? Ya got my little self-esteem machine up and running again. Thanks friend

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-10-26 09:54 PM

All RIGHT!!

~* If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~

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