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Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-10-24 11:25 PM



Rose tonight
See my eyes

Fall no longer into lies
I love the way your heart sets far into the night
That the wind can not see your body of white

Such is the beauty of sight
with you around the life of another
It is here for now
for your heart shapes my desires

© Copyright 2011 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-10-30 11:04 AM


This is almost picturesque and loaded with desire and heartfelt emotion.

Really nice work, Tomer~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2011-10-30 05:34 PM


Enjoyed the read, my friend...

j.

ebonygirl
Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
3 posted 2011-10-30 06:33 PM


Enjoyed Tomer,
ms. e

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