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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-24 09:48 PM



rainbows after storms
God's wondrous kaleidoscope
pot of gold maybe

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-10-24 10:09 PM


beauty!
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-10-24 10:20 PM


Thanks, Lori.

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JL
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3 posted 2011-10-24 10:49 PM


Nice Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-10-24 10:51 PM


Appreciate your thoughts on the poem, JL, Thank you.

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Marchmadness
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5 posted 2011-10-25 03:04 AM


Delightful, Jerry.
                 Ida

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-10-25 06:42 AM


Thank you, Ida,

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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2011-10-30 09:57 PM


Nice writing...pot of gold hopefully...James
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2011-10-30 10:00 PM


Hope so, James, thank you.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

ebonygirl
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9 posted 2011-10-30 10:34 PM


Enjoyed JP,
ms. e

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