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Dakota
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since 2000-05-25
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0 posted 2011-10-23 01:59 AM



She stands right in front of me, but the vision I can not see.
She waits for my vision to clear, I may never see her I fear.
Until the moment is right, she will not be in my sight.
When it is meant to be, then only then will I see.
Will the darkness end, how far do I need to bend?
Will she wait for me, will she wait for my Heart to see?
Is her sight clear, can she see me standing here?
Is the light in front of me, enough to make her see?
A spark in my eye, a light in the sky.
A vision comes to me, My Heart begins to see.
Are mine eyes open in time? To find a vision sublime?
I am at the mercy of Fate, to find my one, my true, My Soul mate!


© Copyright 2011 David Ingraham - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-23 08:08 AM


Ah, in my experience with life and love . . . She'll find you . . .

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2011-10-23 10:43 AM


A spark in my eye, a light in the sky.
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That's some vision.  well done Dakota~

Dakota
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since 2000-05-25
Posts 125
New York
3 posted 2011-10-24 12:36 PM


Thank you!
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