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Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2011-10-23 12:33 PM

Angel Wishes

I fell in the air and I drowned
in the sky

The waves bid adieu as they made
the wind cry

The truths are all hidden in front
of our eyes

My heart is now bleached the color
of dye

I know every secret you’ve hid in your
hips

You’ve tasted the mysteries that poured
from my tips

I’ve heard all the grunts of your body
I’ve ripped

You painted the wounds of my heart
that you whipped

Body to body and shoeprint to
soul

I am the eclipse to darken
your whole

Whimper and whither bending
and pole

Pink star of night blacker then
coal

Your morals say no but your oral
says more

Your scars are all healed but your smile
is sore

Your devil says quit but your angel
says more

Your have is a saint but your want
is a *bleep*

I lay on your tongue and I suck
on your dreams

I thrust though your eyelids and sit
on your screams

I pump in your flesh and I burst
all your seams

I fell in the air, and I drowned,
in your streams.
yeah i know, a little spicy.. you're welcome

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2011-10-23 12:39 PM

This "angel" couldn't help it! The Devil made me do it! ~ all of it!

Oh, bless me Father for I have sinned...

You naughty boy!

EA

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2011-10-23 12:50 PM

HAHAHAH.. oh Linda.. haha.. that was soo classic... I'm glad you reviewed this piece first.. your comments were so you..

me thinks you have some prayin to do tomorra.. lol

((((luv ya!)))

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2011-10-23 01:12 AM

Oooh ... my feet are warm now.

A

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2011-10-23 01:20 AM

"Pink star of night blacker then
coal"

a little spicy

but oh so nice Richy.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2011-10-23 01:32 AM

I'm glad Ali dear, as they always should be..

actually, mine are a little warm too.. lol

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2011-10-23 01:36 AM

thank you sweet lady..

I am honored by your gracefull, and stirring self..

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-10-23 07:02 AM

hot cha cha Richy! nice

Lori

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2011-10-23 01:32 PM

Thanks for the dance Lori.. I always did like, the cha cha cha..

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

9 posted 2011-10-28 12:45 PM

Ohhh I like it spicy, especially loved the rhymes! Keeper fo sure!
Kat >^..^<

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2011-10-28 06:35 PM

Bad boy??
Times 10!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2011-11-01 11:17 AM

Well, that was some Angel who made you do it, I say, dear Richy.

You are unbound in your expressions and you bring smiles and sighs. Mission fulfilled!

Great really ... and now I am going for my first November walk, your words make for warm weather!

Margherita

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

12 posted 2012-08-10 01:51 AM

whew! very NICE!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

13 posted 2013-02-14 07:12 AM

Loved it Richy, near each line was a surprise

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