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The Angel Made Me Do It.

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Richy
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0 posted 10-23-2011 12:33 AM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richy

Angel Wishes

I fell in the air and I drowned
in the sky

The waves bid adieu as they made
the wind cry

The truths are all hidden in front
of our eyes

My heart is now bleached the color
of dye

I know every secret youíve hid in your
hips

Youíve tasted the mysteries that poured
from my tips

Iíve heard all the grunts of your body
Iíve ripped

You painted the wounds of my heart
that you whipped

Body to body and shoeprint to
soul

I am the eclipse to darken
your whole

Whimper and whither bending
and pole

Pink star of night blacker then
coal

Your morals say no but your oral
says more

Your scars are all healed but your smile
is sore

Your devil says quit but your angel
says more

Your have is a saint but your want
is a *bleep*

I lay on your tongue and I suck
on your dreams

I thrust though your eyelids and sit
on your screams

I pump in your flesh and I burst
all your seams

I fell in the air, and I drowned,
in your streams.
yeah i know, a little spicy.. you're welcome
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1 posted 10-23-2011 12:39 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

This "angel" couldn't help it! The Devil made me do it! ~ all of it!

Oh, bless me Father for I have sinned...

You naughty boy!


EA
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HAHAHAH.. oh Linda.. haha.. that was soo classic... I'm glad you reviewed this piece first.. your comments were so you..  

me thinks you have some prayin to do tomorra.. lol

((((luv ya!)))

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3 posted 10-23-2011 01:12 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Oooh ... my feet are warm now.

A
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"Pink star of night blacker then
coal"  

a little spicy

but oh so nice Richy.  

Richy
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I'm glad Ali dear, as they always should be..



actually, mine are a little warm too.. lol

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thank you sweet lady..

I am honored by your gracefull, and stirring self..

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 10-23-2011 07:02 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

hot cha cha Richy! nice

Lori
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Thanks for the dance Lori.. I always did like, the cha cha cha..

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Ohhh I like it spicy, especially loved the rhymes! Keeper fo sure!
Kat >^..^<
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Bad boy??
Times 10!!

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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Well, that was some Angel who made you do it, I say, dear Richy.

You are unbound in your expressions and you bring smiles and sighs. Mission fulfilled!

Great really ... and now I am going for my first November walk, your words make for warm weather!

Margherita
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whew! very NICE!
Rick
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Loved it Richy, near each line was a surprise
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