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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-22 02:19 PM




She dropped her pretenses
and they slid down her silky
her eyes followed them to the floor
with an invitation


LGR(C)10/22/11

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Richy
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1 posted 2011-10-22 02:22 PM



okay i think i just dropped my, post tenses.. ! ..

haha.. don't ask lol

luvlee..


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2011-10-22 02:23 PM


Not unnoticed by the man in the room
As he hollowed out his cheek with his tongue
Swallowing the lump in his throat
As large as his wonderment . . .

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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3 posted 2011-10-22 03:04 PM


What?

Can you send a picture?

Heeheeeheee...
Nice one Lori.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-10-22 03:42 PM


I promise I won't peek Richy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2011-10-22 03:46 PM


Jerry Love it. thanks.

Lori

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JL!  lol

Lori

Richy
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6 posted 2011-10-23 12:27 PM


oh sure, not with one of your eyes maybe, but i see the other one wiiiiiddee open lol



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