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It's your eyes...
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It's your eyes... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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It’s your eyes that undo me They look at me From deep pools of brown That pull me into you And I am helpless To resist But It’s your smile That undoes me more When you stop What you are doing to see me Yes It’s your smile That simply says I’m here You’re here What next…. © 2011 Roniece.com Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love your ending, sometimes we just can't help ourself, and that's not always a bad thing. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thanks so much for your lovely comments BS.. :-) Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What next, indeed. The smile will get the message across I've no doubt. ~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
umm, ummm, ummmm... My, my. Now that is picture perfect. Love it. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! [This message has been edited by JL (10-24-2011 08:20 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Nothing beats the appeal of beautiful eyes... unless it's a beautiful smile... unless it's... *G* I love this!! |
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Elric Junior Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 43southbend, WA |
Wonderfully written. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautifully written Roniece. what the eyes don't say, the smile does. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful romantic writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Roniece. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to see you writing again, Roniece, Very nice. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
It's be so long since I've read beautiful words from you! I must say, it's been a long time since I've read the words from anyone on here~ Feels good to see you around =D |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ahhh thank you so much everyone for your warm and lovely comments.. sure is nice to be home xx Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fantastic atmosphere, dear Roniece. Eye-smiles are indeed like an ouverture to a great concert starting with magic. Love it! Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The eyes have always been my downfall...mesmerizing pools of soul. very much enjoyed this... j. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yes! A smile can mean so much, can't it? A beautiful reflection. It stirred the memory in me. Thank you. Michael |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ahh thank you so much Margherita, Jwesley and Michael.. you have brought me smiles... :-) Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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