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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 2011-10-21 04:13 PM


World in a Bottle

Perhaps like bottles erstwhile,
bobbing within ebbing tides,
we once again find ourselves
kept apart from seasoned glass enclosed.

Messages from a time anon,
faded to genteel obscurity
by scorching lazy-eye scrutiny,
crumble slowly from the lulling ebb to flow.

Alicat
10-15-11


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-10-21 07:03 PM


Oh this one grand fine poem, wonderful way you have.
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2011-10-22 01:06 AM


You have beeen missed.I often wondered how you were. latearrival

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2011-10-22 02:03 PM


Alicat! How good it is to see you bobbing on these sea-blue pages again!
Very creative!


EA

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