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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2011-10-21 04:01 AM



Dreams
.
.
.
Watching in loneliness

just to hear your voice

plans never become

reality of dreams

smashed within

minutes of maybe

wanting to make life fit

when it's all right there

within one's heart

to break the loneliness

together forever
.
.
.
bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-10-21 07:31 AM


Sometimes the direct approach is the best game plan. Enjoyed your poetry this morning.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2011-10-21 12:35 PM


Sadly, even our dreams don't always go according to plan.  

You've expressed some heartfelt emotions very well.


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2011-10-22 03:22 PM


Bernie, may you manifest your plans into pleasant dreams and a reality filled with love.


Linda

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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4 posted 2011-10-22 03:23 PM


Excellent dream and write Bernie.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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