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Adam Casadevall
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since 2010-09-08
Posts 4
New Jersey

0 posted 2011-10-20 03:50 PM


I don't understand their fascination
They're not here yet but they exist
In the minds of the men
Who say life will soon end
If we carry on living as if
The sources will keep giving
Infinitely

I'll slit my wrists on the horizon
To stay alive and prove to you
There are no fakes in this world
So rest easy little girl
I'll just sit here quietly
Soon the pleas from my heart will carry you
Where you belong

Wash away all your doubt
In the spring of time the truth flows
You may recognize me again
I've unfocused your lens
C'mon C'mon C'mon C'mon
Surrender yourself to the wind I've created
Just for you

Am I the only one that sees
The destruction of the trees
Has led you all to believe
Real love is just a dream

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-10-23 10:50 AM


There's a lot going on here and I enjoyed reading
your poem and pondering your thoughts.

Good stuff~
Welcome to the blue sea, Adam

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