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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-10-19 07:18 AM

the winds says you were harvesting from the evening
gathering the warm milk of melting moon
and pressing it into your long limb vase there
to be the gazelle on sprinting fever of dawn

sumatra was a scent of leather with warm love
as if it had been savored to pinch flavors
and your lips were in that shape of around
with laughter splashing from chin to bosom

you wrote dare me words in the sand of time
licking your finger after with seduction
said the sand was like sugar how it stung
and left that grit of remembering me along

said it left an itch in your womb with room
for more kinds of crazy wanting to
a place for my secret to ruin your edges
and find things you really wanted to need

and sometimes you kneaded them with wanting

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-19 09:18 AM

you wrote dare me words in the sand of time

I haven't written secrets on the shore for the waves to wash away in keeping for a long time... but this reminds me... and a trip to sand might just be in order. *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-10-19 09:20 AM

ms suthern...thanks lady...you are always welcome here...this sand is catless..

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2011-10-19 09:23 AM

this makes me want to slip
into the giant sandman and
let him have his way with me

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-10-19 09:25 AM

ms ER....thank you for the eyes ms

Eusta B. Mae 2
Junior Member

since 2011-10-20

Posts 15
state of confusion

5 posted 2011-10-20 12:05 PM

"a place for my secret to ruin your edges
and find things you really wanted to need"

Tell me your secret, I'll show ..er,um, tell you mine. ebm

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-10-20 01:09 PM

Ms elm, something out of evil woman song? Thanks ms

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2011-10-20 10:06 PM

Mr. Dark, what have you found lately?
Enjoyed your poem,
ms. e

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2011-10-21 07:16 AM

ms E....nothing lost, so nothing found...thanks ms

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2011-11-01 06:20 AM

quote:
and your lips were in that shape of around
with laughter splashing from chin to bosom

There are always these incredibly creative passages in all of your works.

True abundance of poetic highs.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2011-11-01 07:06 AM

ms mar, thanks lady friend

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