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Dawn Brink
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since 2011-04-28
Posts 44
South Africa

0 posted 2011-10-14 05:53 PM


It's somehow my intrusion on your silence that bothers me more than
your silence.
I'm ashamed that I would want you and crave just one word from you
when just a word from you requires just too much effort.

My own breach of that silence screams loudly at my pride and my self-respect. My breach of silence exposes me and leaves me in danger.
I'm in danger.
I'm in danger and I'm ashamed and yet, depite my shame, I'm proud.

I'll take risks and be exposed and
I'll be in danger.
Sometimes the risk may just be worth it
and I'm willing to
try.

You're silent (are you in hiding?)
I'm exposed and though I hate to admit it,
vulnerable.
Perhaps I will also go into hiding.
Though knowing myself I'll never hide.
I'm a risk-taker, a trouble facer and a life embracer.

I'm out here in the open.
I'm alone out here in the open.
I want you with me, but you're
safe and hidden away.

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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

1 posted 2011-10-14 09:09 PM


attraction of opposites - risky, yes - magnetic, yes
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-10-14 10:09 PM


"I'm out here in the open.
I'm alone out here in the open.
I want you with me, but you're
safe and hidden away."

I can feel the conflict, but sometimes being a chameleon may be best.

JL

  

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2011-10-14 11:33 PM


Great energy here, excellent power.
Dawn Brink
Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44
South Africa
4 posted 2011-10-15 02:30 AM


Thank you so much for the comments!
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