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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-10-14 11:41 AM

A sense of solitude
as others slumber soft
Me to my self's
mischievous mind
mingling words
and rhymes
Time seems
swift and sacred
Scattered whispers
to collect
and protect
within this fleeting
before sunrise

LGR(10/14/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-14 12:11 PM

Honestly composed, giving in to your inner self in the early part of the day when the mind is full of words and phrases needing, and wanting to be released. And when you release them they are a delight to read.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-10-14 12:19 PM

I wrote that earlier and easier than my PIP comments. Amazing...I was all thumbs and thick headed trying to comment. Thanks for yours Jerry, it was very insightful

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2011-10-14 01:04 PM

Has a personal feel to it, yet something that resonates in me as well

I enjoyed

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
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4 posted 2011-10-14 01:12 PM

Hey EmmaRose, maybe it is some mindwestern thing we have in common

. Thanks for your comment.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-10-14 02:27 PM

"A sense of solitude
as others slumber soft
Me to my self's
mischievous mind
mingling words
and rhymes"

A nice way to start the day!
Well, if you add in a cup of coffee too.
Enjoyed your musing.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2011-10-14 02:46 PM

so glad you share your feelings, within..

it makes the sun rise that much higher..

Lovely

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-10-14 03:38 PM

JL that is part of the fleeting...waiting on the coffee to brew...it is almost a sacred ritual.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-10-14 03:41 PM

Richy, you are waay to sweet (but that's how I like my coffee in the morning)I'll keep that in mind, you're too kind.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

9 posted 2011-10-17 01:58 PM

I love the moments right before dawn, when all is quiet and still. There is a true peace there, albeit fleeting...

Enjoyed this one.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2011-10-17 02:02 PM

Thanks Michael. Maybe that is where the term "it dawned on me" came from.

Lori

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