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karren29
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since 2011-09-29
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philippines

0 posted 2011-10-14 08:44 AM



a song i wrote 2 nights ago

I don’t know you, you don’t know me
Total strangers, that’s what were supposed to be
I don’t know you, you don’t know me
We just talked a little bit, but you made me so happy

What has got into me?
I find myself smiling alone
What has got into me?
I find myself singing your song

Maybe this could be something
Maybe you feel what I’m feeling
Maybe I have a place in your heart
Maybe this could be a good start

I was enchanted meeting you
I hope you’re feeling the same way too
The clock strikes 30 after nine
I can’t get you off my mind

Maybe this could be something
Or maybe this is just nothing
Maybe you’re singing that song
On your way back home

I don’t usually do this
It’s crazy but I think I miss
Those songs you played for me
They’re driving me crazy

The more I get to know you
The more I fall for you

Maybe this could be something
Or maybe it’s just so confusing
Maybe you feel something too
Don’t tell me I mean nothing to you

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-10-14 03:00 PM


Great song, Karren.  

Enjoyed!!
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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