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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2011-10-14 12:56 PM


I thought I saw you
in hindsight
catch a glimpse of my heart

and I thought you may
have caught a glimpse of me
glimpsing at you
wondering...

what real love feels like.....

and I have a feeling

you...
just might...
know what to do
with what I saw you
glimpse
in my heart...


~~~kingsangel~~~

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2011-10-14 07:26 AM


Very nice wordplay!

M

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2011-10-14 07:40 AM


ms king....you do it good lady!!
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-10-14 07:47 AM


Sweet sentiment, and hopeful poetry.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
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4 posted 2011-10-14 12:28 PM


awww thank you all for reading stop to read,....your commnets put a smile on my face on an other wise bad morning!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Michael
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5 posted 2011-10-17 01:54 PM


'Tis a lovely feeling you describe.  Here's to hope.
Michael

JL
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2011-10-17 03:39 PM


And a beautiful heart it must be to verse such wonderful words.

JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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7 posted 2011-10-21 01:03 PM


Very clever write, Julie.
               Ida

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8 posted 2011-10-22 05:13 PM


and I have a feeling

you...
just might...
know what to do
with what I saw you
glimpse
in my heart...

This is full of hope and all the possibilities it offers... Beautiful write!

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