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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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mind chained linked to the grid a marix of sorts bending turning twisting tales that awaken when you open your eyes before you the shapes form as if from your imaginaiton the dream becomes real shaking your reality as kindreds meet like strangers on the street the familiar face never rings a bell catching the others eye for just a moment then the moment passes and you continue to sleep as you remember waking from the dream ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"and you continue to sleep as you remember waking from the dream" Ah, what a nice poem. Love it, and that last line is a winner! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Some good writing here, Julie. I especially like the first verse. Ida |
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