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karren29
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since 2011-09-29
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0 posted 2011-10-13 01:33 AM



Forgive me, for saying I love you
Forgive me, for making you believe it's true
Forgive me, I didn't mean to do it
Forgive me, it's not you who I wanted

Forgive me, for calling your name
Forgive me, for playing this game
Forgive me, for making you go insane
Forgive me, i'm the one to blame

Forgive me, for breaking your heart
Forgive me, for tearing you apart
Forgive me, for leaving you in the dark
Forgive me, for making it so hard

Forgive me, I didn't want us to end this way
Forgive me, I didn't want to take your dreams away
Forgive me, If I could only make things right again
Forgive me, for making you put your life to its end

Forgive me, for making you cry
Forgive me, it was all a lie
Forgive me, I didn't want you to die
Forgive me, I really thought there could be YOU and I..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-10-13 03:02 AM


Some games are dangerous and there can be consequences that hurt. In your powerful forgiveness prayer-poem this situation is well expressed. Sometimes we don't know what we do, more awareness is needed yes!

And yet to be able to apologize is an act of humility that plants the seeds of healing.

M

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-10-13 11:09 AM


"Forgive me, for saying I love you
Forgive me, for making you believe it's true
Forgive me, I didn't mean to do it
Forgive me, it's not you who I wanted"

Sad start and ending.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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