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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2011-10-12 04:40 PM

Come flow with me, come be my love true
come move your fingers along toward mine
then glow with me, we’ll start anew
and play will we this pantomime.

Your eyes shall caress my naked soul
and linger on in my artless heart
for I know it to be a virtuous goal
that never shall we ever part.

Use the prose that only you speak
and nay cast me downward, sire,
but lift me high until I peak
to slowly drown in my desire.

With fingertips warm do softly play
when your hands reach beyond my touch
and, listen wistful to what I say ~
knowing I love you, oh, so much.

Embrace me whole, enfold my all,
as I fall within your passion so deep:
till love’s rapture doth we call
for as you sow, so shall you reap.

(c) KRJ
orig 1999
Revised 10-12-11

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-12 05:49 PM

Well, this was beautifully done, from the archives or not. From the beginning of this passionate poem you were artful in your desire to seek and instruct a warm hand, eyes which to devour you and fingertips to enthrall. I have to say, if the instructions were followed religiously the night would follow the day into the eroticism of human passion and spiritual softness.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-10-12 06:41 PM

This is a great love song! I could almost hear it being sung by the likes of Frank Sinatra, or Dionne Warwick, or even Sammy Davis Jr.

Very, very much you in this write.
Beautiful.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-10-12 06:47 PM

I like what Jerry said...but I think it would sound weird if I said it. Good stuff!

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-10-12 08:14 PM

Very pretty my friend...and like jerry said...too, I think.

j.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-10-12 09:12 PM

Beautiful rhyme, wonderfully romantic... You've got one very pleased reader here! *S*

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-10-13 04:14 AM

Very lovely, soft and passionate contemporaneously. A sparkling ouverture to the symphony of love that life offered you.

M

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2011-10-13 02:04 PM

Wow, K. This is perfect... not only in form, but in reaching in to the heart of the reader. This is Poetry. You are one talented lady. I humbly bow to you.

Michael

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2011-10-13 03:45 PM

Greetings, Glorious Orb of Light.
Karilea, this was breathtaking, sensuous, and totally captivating. Your poetry spans so many avenues and it is always exquisite and touching.

Love to you and a big hug,
Linda

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