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karren29
Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines

0 posted 2011-10-11 09:37 AM



I'm just another girl looking for him
I know the chances are getting slim
If he's waiting there for me
Then I'm too blind to see

I've waited half my life
To find somebody to hold
But why don't it feel right
Why is my world so cold?


Where are you?
Can you hear me calling?
Where are you?
Do you feel what I'm feeling?


I'm starting to believe
No one's meant for me
It's getting hard to breathe
Won't you please save me

I don't wanna wait
I don't wanna cry
I don't wanna ache
I don't wanna die

Where are you?
Are you waiting for me too?
Where are you?
Are trying to find me too?

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-10-11 09:57 AM


Beautiful outcry, dear Karren. There is most assuredly one that corresponds to your visions of the perfect match. May your dream manifest!

M

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-10-11 10:01 AM


sometimes you just got to kiss all them darn frogs to find your prince...
Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2011-10-11 10:33 AM


Guaranteed he's out there...and I found, years and years ago, that when I Stopped Looking and just started enjoying myself,

...she found me.

Cool piece my friend...

j.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2011-10-13 11:05 AM


Nice write, I think most people go through this type of situation.
I think what J said is good advice.  But don't go kissing any darn frogs!  (Lorie...??)


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

karren29
Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines
5 posted 2011-10-13 07:41 PM


hahahahaha i like so much you guys.. and thanks for reading this..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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