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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-10 10:23 PM


It is the little things that get you
A smile when deserved
A hug when needed
Little things are bigger than big things
Especially when they are offered
By a stranger
From afar comes the loveliness
Wrapped in gentle
And caring
Little things



~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
ebonygirl
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1 posted 2011-10-10 10:28 PM


I love the "little things" you describe, they always touch my soul, JP2,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-10-10 10:31 PM


Yeah, so do the mine, Ms. E.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-10-11 03:26 AM


This is so true, Jerry, and I love how you expressed this profound truth.

Recently I was waiting my turn at the post office and felt my patience growing thin, so my face was grim ... Then suddenly my eyes caught the smile of a young girl sitting next to me. She seemed to encourage me "be patient" ... Unbelievable how that warm smile changed my attitude and really really permeated my whole being. A little thing? And yet a precious gift indeed.

M

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-10-11 06:19 AM


You absolutely deserve this !

Lori

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-10-11 08:04 AM


Margherita, that was a nice example of what I was thinking of. Thank you for being here.

Things such as that, Lori, fill me with gladness. Thanks.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

jwesley
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6 posted 2011-10-11 10:41 AM


Little things, huh??  

Like that extra meat patty (that I didn't order) on my What-a-Burger
the other day??

Yessirree!! Little things make the day!!

Cool Jerry...

j.

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-10-11 12:45 PM


I hear ya, jwesley, and like when I order a Big Buford at Rallys and I open it up and it looks like it looks on the advertisements. I know of where they do that, amazing, never thought I would see it. Little thing, like doing it right mean much.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

JL
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8 posted 2011-10-11 01:27 PM


Enjoyed.  And you are so right.  Ms E. above proves the point.  Nice one Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2011-10-11 02:22 PM


Yep, she did that, thanks JL for stopping by.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Michael
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10 posted 2011-10-11 07:46 PM


Man, it's geting warm and mushy in here... oh, it's just your poem...lol  You're right though, it's the little things that mean the most when all is said and done.  Glad you found a little slice of heaven.


Michael

JerryPat2
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11 posted 2011-10-11 08:02 PM


No sense rubbing the warm and mushy stuff in, Michael, I'm embarrassed enough as it 'tis.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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