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karren29
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0 posted 2011-10-10 07:40 PM



It's been 5 days since you left my heart broken,
I thought I couldn’t bear it but I had my head shaken.
Yes it still hurts but now I know better
That we were never really meant to be together

I've built my world around you
I thought what we had was true
I shared all my dreams with you
I even imagined you shared yours too.

I will count 5 more days, 5 more weeks, 5 more months, or even 5 more years
It will take that long before I can dry all these tears
I will have sleepless nights; I will forever have this fright
But I will continue to fight till I find the light.

People say it takes time to mend a broken heart
But I’m willing to have a brand new start.
I will believe in falling in love again,
And those heartbreaks are never the end.

I still love you, Oh God I really do
I still wish somehow you feel the same way too
I imagine you hugging me so tight
I really miss the way it felt so right.

But I know it's time to go back to reality
By moving on, I’m setting myself free
It will take some time but I will get over you
Someday, somehow I'll find another love that's true

Now all I do is silently cry and pray
That God will continue to find a way
To help me forget you and live another day
And the words "I'm happy" I can finally say.

I hope this will be the last time my heart will die
For tomorrow I'll live again and I'll try to fly
I will forever treasure those sweet moments we had
And I will forget the day you made me sad.

It's really goodbye now so I'm letting you go
But before that I want you to know
That no matter what happens I will never fear
Falling in love again and shedding another tear

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2011-10-10 07:47 PM


and you must not fear the fall, my friend...it's always an awesome thing...

enjoyed,

j.

karren29
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2 posted 2011-10-10 07:53 PM


thank you. im glad you liked it

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

Michael
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3 posted 2011-10-10 08:01 PM


To know love at all is to know it's worth all the pain ten times over.

Indeed, never fear it.


Michael

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2011-10-10 09:55 PM


We breath deeply and start again, appreciate your poem Karen, Ms. E
karren29
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5 posted 2011-10-10 11:48 PM


thanks mike, thanks ms. e

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

suthern
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6 posted 2011-10-12 11:04 AM


Now all I do is silently cry and pray
That God will continue to find a way
To help me forget you and live another day
And the words "I'm happy" I can finally say.

You've taken the first steps just by giving love another chance... Enjoyed the write!

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
7 posted 2011-10-12 02:08 PM


"That no matter what happens I will never fear
Falling in love again and shedding another tear"

With that attitude you will be just fine.
Life is what we make of it as we do our best.
Enjoyed.
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

karren29
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since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines
8 posted 2011-10-12 11:06 PM


thank you suthern, thanks JL.. this site is the best really, not only you can share ur work but u can find someone to talk to.. u dont know how much ur helping me right now.. thank you

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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