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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2011-10-07 05:24 PM



Tears brimming
anger brewing
ain't even worth the words
as the lies keep growing
and I remember
how you shrugged
and walked away
like it was better
if I wondered
for just a little longer
as if you were
tied and bound
unable to speak
and fill me in
and now I wonder
if your still
wondering
how long
it will take me
to figure it out...

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Michael
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1 posted 2011-10-07 06:21 PM


Just walk away... probably not worth the wondering.  ((HUGS)) anyway.


Michael

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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2 posted 2011-10-08 07:19 PM


Good advise and thank you....you know when I started writing this one I was thinking about one thing and by the time I was done it was about something completely different. Now when I read it, I can ralate it two or more instances....just one of thoe things where you gotta read between the lies....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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