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Margherita
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0 posted 2011-10-07 01:33 PM






loving acceptance:

hearts dwell in a state of grace

when oneness is known


© Copyright 2011 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-10-07 02:09 PM


Poem and picture are very beautiful.  It is a pity that so few people understand this or reach it.

Owl

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2 posted 2011-10-07 02:13 PM


How very lovely!!
flash
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3 posted 2011-10-07 04:21 PM


Margherita: A nice fusion of poem and colorful photo. And I share the sentiment. Oneness produces harmony and love.

Thanks for sharing,

Al  

JL
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4 posted 2011-10-07 04:45 PM


Nice Margherita!  Wondering what type of flowering plant that is???  None-the-less, your senryu is beautiful.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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5 posted 2011-10-07 06:15 PM


There is a lot to be said
about your art,
how it circles, like life,
into being.

And when being Margherita
is aware of all that is,
then the poems are always
magical.




JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-10-07 06:54 PM


Ah, yes indeed, it takes time for that oneness to meld. Very nicely done, Margherita.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Michael
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7 posted 2011-10-07 06:58 PM


I've never seen a more appropriately named poem.  I seek that oneness.  Maybe one day...


Michael

Margherita
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8 posted 2011-10-08 04:00 AM


Thank you, dear Owl, for your kind comment. More and more people will evolve into the awareness that there is no separation at the soul level and therefore whatever feeling of hatred we may develop towards "others" will melt away and transform into understanding and love as soon as we discover our common divine core.

Thank you, dear Ruth, for telling me you enjoyed this thought.

Dear Al, thank you for your alignment to the concept I tried to convey. I looked for two flowers which could express the idea of oneness. I think the reflection is a revealing element here.

Dear JL, thank you for your kind reply. I actually looked for a lotus flower, but these two are water lilies of the water plant family "Nymphaeaceae". They are similar in aspect to lotus flowers, which are sacred in India for example and are often used to represent spirituality.

Thank you so much, dear Karilea, for your loving comment and for reaching into the depth of the "oneness mystery and magic".

Dear Jerry, thank you for your kind comment. Yes it takes time, yet I am sure we shall all reach this awareness.

Dear Michael, thank you, I enjoyed your comment. As we know, those who seek shall find ... The point is that at our human level this truth almost surpasses our comprehension, even when we grasp it mentally, but when we let it sink into the heart core it will bloom. Remember "I am in Him as He is in me and likewise I am in you and you are in me ...". Overwhelmingly comforting thought.

Love to all and have a wonderful week-end.
Margherita


ice
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9 posted 2011-10-08 07:13 AM


I am amazed at how you are able to use thirteen words to convey thousands of thoughts..

This Sen is no exception...love it!

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2011-10-08 02:37 PM


You have such a wonderful talent for haiku and senru, Margherita and for matches them to such beautiful pictures.
                              Ida

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11 posted 2011-10-09 08:49 AM


Thank you so much, dear Ford, for your kind appreciation. Indeed it is not easy to pack something meaningful into such a tiny space, but I love the challenge!

Thank you, dear Ida, I enjoyed your loving and generous comment.

Love and Happy Sunday to all!
Margherita

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2011-12-09 06:12 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Margherita
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13 posted 2011-12-10 08:41 AM


Thank you so much, James!
2islander2
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14 posted 2011-12-11 10:46 AM


brilliant margherita, these accurate thoughts are upsetting, it made me humble and grateful

yann


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15 posted 2011-12-11 05:54 PM


Dear Margherita,
I now know why I enjoy your poems so much.
Your poems are healing poems, poems of wisdom and encouragement, like this one.
Ms. E

Sunshine
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16 posted 2011-12-11 07:36 PM


You

are Grace and One

and Bless

us all.


ThisDiamond
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17 posted 2011-12-11 07:52 PM


Love this!
Margherita
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18 posted 2011-12-13 05:48 PM


Thank you, dear Yann, Ebonygirl, Karilea and Kathleen. Your loving comments touched my heart.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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19 posted 2011-12-14 12:21 PM



I always look forward to reading you work Margherita
and you always delight.

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