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karren29
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since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines

0 posted 2011-10-07 07:26 AM



a song i wrote....

Knowing what I had
Feeling really bad
Lost it all that night
Can no longer fight

Life is different when you're all alone
Got nothing to do but cry and play your song

Strumming guitar strings
Staring at my ring
Recalling the past
Love I thought would last

Love is hard when you walk on a one way street
And all you can hear is your own heartbeat

Staring at my face
Thinking of that place
Playing our love song
Where did we go wrong?

Love is crazy when you're the only one
Looking for something that's been gone

Crying once again
Wish it didn't end
Wiping tears away
Know I'll be okay

Love is one extraordinary feeling
One day I'll find my happy ending

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-10-07 04:53 PM


I really like this song.  One of your best writes.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-10-07 07:01 PM


I'll drink a couple of beers over this one. Play it again, Joe.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

karren29
Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines
3 posted 2011-10-07 07:20 PM


HEHE, thanks JL, thanks jerry..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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