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karren29
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since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines

0 posted 2011-10-04 07:03 PM



how does it feel to be in love?
its a question i never dared to ask
some say its cool but i say its not
cause you'll get nothing but a broken heart.

first he'll give you roses, then he'll walk you home
you'll perhaps share kisses, never leave you alone
but after a couple months you'll see,
how ruthless he can be.

how does it feel to be hurt
got nothing to do but hug his shirt
you'll cry all night wishing he'll be back
its really over but u cant accept that fact

how does it feel to find another guy
you'll fall in love again just to find out he lied
tears will fall once more as u walk out the door
tell yourself you'll never fall in love anymore

how does it feel to lose your sanity
you've given everything yet they chose to set u free
tired and defeated u live your life alone
wishing you'll be as hard as a stone

what would u feel if u were me?
trying so hard to breathe..
how would u set yourself free?
if he's d only one u want to be with...

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-10-04 08:19 PM


"what would u feel if u were me?
trying so hard to breathe.."

Nice write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

karren29
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since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines
2 posted 2011-10-04 09:19 PM


thanks JL

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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