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Elric
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since 2010-08-24
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southbend, WA

0 posted 2011-10-04 10:57 AM



All around me is darkness,
without her watching over me.
She departed and left me
with my fear.
I remember when she was near,
splendid and wrapped in gold.
She peeked through the green giants around me,
unfolding before me like a blossoming red rose.
Her brilliant light deafened me to all else.
My every leaf savagely devoured her,
as if she were honeysuckle.
Until she slowly hid behind
the tall green giants.
Leaving me with my fear,
and awaiting her return,
to bathe me in light once again.


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-10-04 07:00 PM


This is lovely.

M

karren29
Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines
2 posted 2011-10-04 07:24 PM


this is beautiful!!! i loved it!!

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
3 posted 2011-10-04 09:59 PM


Nicely done, enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

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