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karren29
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0 posted 2011-10-03 04:39 PM





when will u stop loving someone?
when u have no more tears to cry?
or when ur hurting too much u wish to die?

when will u stop loving someone?
when u feel he's not the one u've met before?
or when he tells u he doesnt care anymore..

when will u stop loving someone?
can u show me how to forget his name?
will u help me before i go insane..

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2011-10-06 07:52 PM


It sounds like you're on the right path...James
Krawdad
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2 posted 2011-10-06 11:10 PM


I would doubt that you ever can
be his name Bob or be it Dan
trust there will be another man

karren29
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since 2011-09-29
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3 posted 2011-10-07 06:41 AM


thanks for reading and commenting guys..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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