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Open Poetry #47

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ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

0 posted 2011-10-02 01:11 PM

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It is now, here

Pink,

Orange aglow

Mists,

Neath, Lavendar Clouds,

Sweep,

Upwards to touch

Tiffany, Robin Egg Sky,

Now,

Feeling you there

Pink,

Orange, Blue Sky

Neath, Lavendar Cloulds

-Feel You-

Savoring my lips

Pink,

Orange, Blue Sky

Neath, Lavendaar Cloulds

You,

Caressing my hair,

I,

Enfolding you there,

Igniting.

E.M.L. - Oct. 2011

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-10-03 10:52 AM

I love how your colors unfold in this enchanting poem, dear Ebonygirl.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2011-10-04 11:21 PM

This is one dreamy poem, your word pallete is a beautiful blending.

Nicely done, ms e~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-10-05 10:26 AM

Ms E....I can see the dawn of this like it was the same sky here..enjoyed this ms

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2011-10-05 01:16 PM

One gets the wonderful feeling of floating while reading this, ms. e. Good way to start the morning.

Michael

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-10-06 01:32 PM

Love your colors of romance, Edna.
Ida

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