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karren29
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since 2011-09-29
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0 posted 2011-10-02 06:45 AM


You held my hand so tight
We watched the stars all night
But still I realize
There's something in your eyes.

The way you say you love me
And that we are meant to be
Is killing every piece of me
If you could only see.

There's no doubt you really care
But it's your heart you can never share
And though you tried your best to love me
It's just not meant to be and so I set you free.

It's hard for me to let go
But it's the only way I know
To spare you from suffering
And to save my heart from dying.

It's true you want my happiness
But it's time to be honest
And as much as it hurts I'm going to say it now
It's time for us to break our vows.

Still I thank you for everything
And it's your love I'll forever be missing
And now that I have to go
Remember what we had was never a show.

I love you dear and so I fear
You'll be miserable if I am near
So take this chance and explore the world
Let your heart be your sword!

Goodbye my love and be happy
I'll be fine you have nothing to worry
Take her hand and you will see,
That I was never your destiny!!

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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1 posted 2011-10-02 09:16 AM


A very hard decision to make, indeed.  You pen it well.
karren29
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2 posted 2011-10-02 09:19 AM


again, thanks nicole

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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3 posted 2011-10-02 10:16 AM


Whoa!

Can't think of anything else to say.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2011-10-02 02:54 PM


So difficult to do, done bravely, enjoyed, ms. e
karren29
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5 posted 2011-10-02 06:44 PM


THANKS jerry, thanks ms e.. glad u liked it

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

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6 posted 2011-10-03 01:42 PM


Sometimes we let someone go because we don't love them... sometimes we let them go because we so love them.

I enjoyed this!

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