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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-09-29 04:06 PM




You might think me a quirky one
or possessing a bit of a kink
But no matter what you think
when you let your imagination run
I’m not as strange as it seems
Well maybe just a little
But only in my dreams

LGR©9/29/11

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-09-29 04:33 PM


Ah, but dreams can come true, I have always heard, Lori.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2011-09-29 04:57 PM


Ah, the freedom of dreams feels so good, dear Lori. They drive us to experience our feelings beyond limits.

Very well expressed.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2011-09-30 11:35 AM


Yes, there is a sense of freedom in our dreams, throwing caution to wind and all that,  that we keep in check in our day to day lives.  

I love how you write!!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2011-09-30 12:16 PM


Jerry, Margherita, and Blues-

Thanks for your response to this poem that is a response to a comment of another poem of mine. Blues, I'm so happy you love my writing, you really encourage me, bless your heart!
Lori

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-09-30 12:51 PM


"when you let your imagination run
I’m not as strange as it seems
Well maybe just a little
But only in my dreams"

Great write.  And as you might say:
"Sweet!"

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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