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Open Poetry #47

Time Worth Waiting

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-09-29 12:05 PM

My waters run deep
in those dark places
made for pleasing
My heart races
my pleasure flows
from your teasing
You tantalize me
in my sleep
My flesh restless
in time worth waiting
for your caress
I won’t be denied
My dark places
will be satisfied

LGR©9/29/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-09-29 01:07 PM

That's what I'm talking about, Lori. You give the reader poetry that causes them to lift an eyebrow and smile a smile somewhere between lustful and quirky.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2011-09-29 01:19 PM

Indeed.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-09-29 08:12 PM

and me, I'm smiling at the boys
smiling at you!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2011-09-30 07:29 AM

And me I'm just smiling because... well, I'm just smiling lets leave it at that haha

Lori one of these times you're going to have to break out of your shell and tell us how you really feel...