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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2011-09-29 12:26 PM

Scattered in Blue

Ascending to white
my head in the clouds of you
I condense to rain

fall for you, run through your hair
wash your tears, greet waiting lips . . .

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-09-29 03:31 AM

Your words just showered me with emotion, dear Krawdad! That's poetry with wings.

Wonderful.

M

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

2 posted 2011-09-29 06:22 AM

Well, this just made me let out a great big gusty sigh. So clever and subtle and sweet. Very lovely

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

3 posted 2011-09-29 11:39 AM

This is really beautiful. Romantic, sweet and beautiful.

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-09-29 12:18 PM

This is gorgeous. Thank you, Kraw.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2011-09-29 01:22 PM

your words are unique, and always worth the read. Enjoyed.

Michael

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-09-29 03:41 PM

Dreamily and exquisitely expressed, Krawdad, as always.

Owl

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2011-09-30 01:27 AM

You are so good. I love how you create an image, an emotion ... with so few words.

A

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2011-09-30 11:02 AM

Yes, love is in the air, and you get it stirring so beautifully~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2011-09-30 01:49 PM

Unique and lovely poem, Krawdad.
Ida

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2011-09-30 11:46 PM

Wonderfully romantic! *S*

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

11 posted 2011-10-01 12:30 PM

Don't we all want to be rain sometimes?
Thanks for enjoying this - it was a smile to write.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

12 posted 2011-10-01 01:32 AM

You, da rainman hereah, enjoyed, romantico. ms. e

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

13 posted 2011-10-01 09:10 AM

Enjoyed both the cryptic and clarity of this.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

14 posted 2011-10-01 04:44 PM

This was GREAT, my friend...wonderful write.

j.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

15 posted 2011-10-07 05:11 PM

Excellent write!
Sounds like this could be
part one of a two part write.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

16 posted 2011-10-08 07:32 AM

Excellent Tanka..love the form..
And you have done the form proud in this one.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

17 posted 2011-12-13 01:49 PM

simply beautiful

g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2011-12-19 12:50 PM

Nice writing...James

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

19 posted 2011-12-23 02:21 AM

Man, this is some sensuality. Love it.

A

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

20 posted 2011-12-23 02:30 AM

Pure romance...with class. Love it.
Ida

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

21 posted 2011-12-29 02:50 PM

this is...all feeling...loved it~*~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

22 posted 2011-12-30 04:56 AM

a mighty lil piece, that sure has impact - gorgeous!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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