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Krawdad
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0 posted 2011-09-28 01:47 AM



at distance, always
so I can not hear her cry
the plea for a touch

and I, silent listener
reach out across the cold night

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OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-09-28 02:01 AM


This is beyond exquisite - in poetry and in the person you are, Krawdad.

Owl

shelerellaSP
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2 posted 2011-09-28 02:17 AM


"beyond exquisite" I think is the right description!
Nicole
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3 posted 2011-09-28 06:45 AM


Oh...this is very lovely.  
Sunshine
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4 posted 2011-09-28 09:16 AM


This is so you, my friend.
It is good to read you again.




JL
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5 posted 2011-09-28 07:58 PM


Excellent, excellent!
Enjoyed.

JL

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Maranatha!

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6 posted 2011-09-30 01:22 AM


This makes me stop.  Just stop.  I like it that much.

Alison

Richy
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7 posted 2011-09-30 07:16 AM



Krawdad my friend, you just nailed what this place and so much of life is all about.

Wonderfully put.

Margherita
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8 posted 2011-09-30 07:22 AM


Ah, you were beautifully inspired indeed, dear Krawdad. To reach out is the number one gesture of love.

Love,
M

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2011-09-30 01:51 PM


Loving your poetry, Krawdad. I should be so inspired.
                         Ida


Krawdad
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10 posted 2011-10-01 12:27 PM


We all need the touch, both ways, no?
Thanks for your kind comments.

dgvarner
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11 posted 2011-12-13 01:50 PM


Yes, I love this...  
g

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ebonygirl
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12 posted 2011-12-13 06:04 PM


"the plea for a touch..."
Really liked your poem "Silent Listener",
Ms. E

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