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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-09-24 09:42 AM


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Changing leaves
In dark gray skies
Honking geese


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JL
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1 posted 2011-09-24 09:52 AM


Nice.  Especially the geese.
An aura of thanksgiving to come.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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2 posted 2011-09-24 10:00 AM


Blue waves rock
orange leaves
swan family promenades


A pleasure to read you.

M

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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3 posted 2011-09-24 02:15 PM


Hah! I had a run-in with two very irate geese a few hours ago. Those things are mean and aggressive.

Nice wordplay.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

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