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flash
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since 2010-11-28
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miami beach, florida

0 posted 2011-09-24 07:26 AM


host of fireflies
outside Motel 6 --
we'll leave the light on

websurfing--
a spider crawls on my screen
my mouse scares it away!

foot fetish--
years of practicing yoga
on my head

busy crosswalk---
the first to step out:
a seeing-eye dog

--Al


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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2011-09-24 07:32 AM


Giggles, Al.  Poor little spider.  I hope he wasn't too frightened and that the seeing-eye dog got across safely (and his human).

Owl

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2011-09-24 08:47 AM


Enjoyed each one of these, dear Al.

Such cute associations!



M

flash
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miami beach, florida
3 posted 2011-09-28 04:36 AM


Owl, Margherita: Glad you enjoyed! Owl: yes, the spider and the dog made it across!

Al

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
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4 posted 2011-09-28 06:36 AM


websurfing--
a spider crawls on my screen
my mouse scares it away!

Very clevah   Gave me a grin - that's the only time I tolerate spiders.

I enjoyed these very much

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
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5 posted 2011-09-28 03:33 PM


Always a treat to read you! You are sooo much fun!
Lori

flash
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6 posted 2011-09-28 05:33 PM


Nicole, Lori: Glad I brought some chuckles.
Laughter the best medicine! Thanks for your generous comments!

Al

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
7 posted 2011-09-28 08:41 PM


LOL! Very clever, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Krawdad
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8 posted 2011-09-28 09:22 PM


Enjoying your humor in these.
Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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Mi now
9 posted 2011-09-28 11:37 PM


All fun, these..but the first is my favorite!  

Best,
Amaryllis

flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
10 posted 2011-09-30 05:33 AM


Hello Kat, Kradad, Amaryllis:

I'm pleased that these made you giggle and smile!
Laughter the best medicine

Al

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