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Open Poetry #47

This Earthly Life

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-09-22 09:14 PM

This Earthly Life

In some ways
it seems like
my life is thru,
without my sweetheart
I don't know
what to do.
Dear God
I will keep
trusting in you,
hoping and praying
my dreams will come true
before I lose all hope
before this earthly life
is through.

JamesLee
22September
2011

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2011-09-22 10:40 PM

James, this earthly life has many gifts, you will enjoy them again, ms. e

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-23 04:15 AM

Yes, don't fall into melancholy, dear James. What would we do without our super romantic James?

Ahh the longing is well expressed!

M

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-09-23 04:35 AM

Nice write, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-23 02:41 PM

Dear God
I will keep
trusting in you,
hoping and praying
my dreams will come true
before I lose all hope
before this earthly life
is through.

I ache for you and hope you can be reunited with your sweetheart. These lines are ones that many of us pray. *S*

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2011-09-23 08:00 PM

James,

This is beautiful... and full of aching. I feel for you, my friend.

You will be in my prayers, as well.

Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-09-23 08:04 PM

It gets better / Time / It takes time, JamesMichael.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

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