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ebonygirl
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0 posted 2011-09-22 03:21 PM



I Have...

I have lots of love to give

from the top of my head

to the tips of my toes

I feel it within me

and my aura knows

one day the steel

will be pulled in

where love's embrace

and comforting begins.
E.M.L
Sept. 2011


© Copyright 2011 E. M. L. - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 2011-09-22 03:56 PM


I hope your one day is soon... he'll be a lucky man! *S*
ebonygirl
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2 posted 2011-09-22 04:07 PM


Thank you Suthern, one day,
ms. e

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-09-22 04:17 PM


This expresses the sweetness of your heart, a heart that knows that true love doesn't recognize any obstacles ... it just flows and penetrates the core of our being. And let's add "blissful" to "comforting"  ...

Lovely write, dear Ebonygirl.

Margherita

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2011-09-22 04:20 PM


Oh, I like blissful, Thank you for my new word Margherita.
ms. e

Michael
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5 posted 2011-09-22 04:49 PM




The hope in this is quite tangible, ms. e...
very inspirational piece.


Michael

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6 posted 2011-09-22 04:55 PM


Ms E....you will wear the metal into sweet polish...enjoyed this one
JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-09-22 11:14 PM


I'm clapping my hand for you to realize this forthcoming reality, Lori.

~~ I'd kill for a Nobel Peace Prize. ~~

JL
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8 posted 2011-09-23 04:34 AM


And a lovely heart you have, Ms E.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ebonygirl
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9 posted 2011-09-24 07:52 PM


Thank you,

Michael
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and JL

ms. e

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