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Open Poetry #47

Wanting You

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-09-22 09:13 AM

I’ve wanted you in the worst way
seems like forever and a day
Too many things getting in the way
Making time
taking time
too tired taking it all away
The spirit is willing
but the flesh is weak
I live for your touches
In the words you speak

LGR©9/22/11

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-09-22 11:58 AM

Whoo-Hooo and wow!
Very nice, short and to the point.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2011-09-22 12:46 PM

I like this very much, Lori... especially the last 2 lines! *S*

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2011-09-22 04:51 PM

Beautifully written, Lori. I know what you mean about too many things getting in the way... too many things like LIFE!

Savor the touches when they come.

Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-22 11:21 PM

Could this be an Internet sweetheart? Whatever it is I don't believe the flesh is weak. Say hello.

~~ I'd kill for a Nobel Peace Prize. ~~

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