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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-09-22 06:48 AM


I heard your laughter when it was running down
from mountain sides of dream scape terrain
you, sultry dawn with your dampened whispers
and that, the residue of your daring spend
to let the many men of me find your woman songs

and then you were noon time tomorrow again
out of my reach but still the limbs of trees
that made my mind climb between more often
searching for the scented leaves you left behind
that I might be adorned within your nudity

evening arrived more quickly than suggested
and you were only then ready, for dancing
but said you might return again later on
if I gave you all my dream demons as flowers
so you could handle their petals with your eyes

and only imagine the pricking of their stems

___________

daark

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1 posted 2011-09-22 12:39 PM


evening arrived more quickly than suggested
and you were only then ready, for dancing
but said you might return again later on

Your imagination turns the most mundane into magic! *S*

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-09-22 01:00 PM


Ms Suthern, thanks lady friend


ebonygirl
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3 posted 2011-09-22 03:06 PM


dream demon flowers, thinking this out,
Enjoyed, Ms. E

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-09-22 03:09 PM


Ms E, thanks lady friend


Margherita
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5 posted 2011-09-22 03:58 PM


Ingenious and delectable, dear D.!


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-09-22 04:56 PM


ms Mar...thank you little lady friend
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2011-09-22 08:31 PM


Ok I'm going to go with the first verse, because I love the terrain and the way your poetry flows.

Have mercy dude, you've pulled up all the stops here...you make it easy to imagine!

Seriously loving the beauty and surrounding sounds of this~~  

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-09-22 09:22 PM


Babyblue, thanks for the smile lady friend
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