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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2011-09-22 01:28 AM


I need to quit asking quesitons
I need to quit wondering why...
I need to create a vision
not sit and watch
what could've been
pass me by

I need to fomulate a beginning
and factor out a now
so that I may
simplify the solution
to this equation somehow

love's radical notations
has left me hanging in dispair
and you baby are the only
thing that's rational
to me around here

I need to clear away
the variables
and raise the power
of love to my heart
cuz there is
no rational expression
to this feeling
that's tearing me apart

So why don't we stop foiling around
and let's make this equaion true
when x = u and y = Me
let's get together and
make X + Y = WE!!!


ROWFLES !!!! DO not ask me where this came from...... but I am wondering now if my Algebra teacher will give me extra credit!!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-09-22 02:06 AM


Heeheeeheeee...
I loved math in school but algebra was like a foreign language I learned to hate.
(What is ROWFLES?)

Enjoyed your math problem.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Angel4aKing
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Posts 1372
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2 posted 2011-09-22 02:09 AM


O thank u for your response ,, lmao rowfles is ( ROLLING ON WET FLOOR LAUGHING EVERY SECOND ) I first saw it in a magazine on an ad for scrabble I tink.... IT TOOK ME A whole YEAR to figure out what that meant!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Michael
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Posts 7666
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3 posted 2011-09-22 02:22 PM


Well, I personally hate algebra... and when you compound that with the frustration factor of love, I feel my brain start to implode.  

Definately good for a laugh this morning, even so...  

thank you.



Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2011-09-22 05:06 PM


I absolutely adored algebra and you used it to create a very enticing poem.

Much enjoyed.

M

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
5 posted 2011-09-22 10:48 PM


I will give you extra credit, how many do you want, well done, A4K, lol, enjoyed your poem, ms. e
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2011-09-22 11:59 PM


Oh my...

I hadn't read your poem until after I posted mine, but mine is so similar I feel like I should delete it now. <--embarrassed.

I've always been bad at the mathy stuff anyhow. But I guess you'll believe me when I say I love the metaphor of using a language of logic to make sense of ourselves.



sisterly hugs!


suthern
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7 posted 2011-09-23 01:45 PM


Your teacher should definitely give you extra credit... after all, you're applying what you've learned to life... and isn't that the point? *S* Delightful!
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
8 posted 2011-09-24 02:15 AM


Hello Michael,

Thank for your response but I have to apologize to you I didn’t mean to implode your brain!!! PS I HATE IT TOO!!! Glad I was able to give you a laugh to start your day!!!

Margherita,

Thank you for stopping into read glad you enjoyed!!!

Ebony,

I need all the credit I can get lol I failed my last test!!!

Serenity,

No don’t delete our poem!! I will look for it before I log off tonight,,,,remember great minds think alike yeah!! I am terrible at love poems and this is about as romantic as I  get lol maybe I am too logical even for algebra!!!

Suthern,

I do not think she will although I did post this in the school DQ board tonight. I hoped it was able to lift everyone out of their humdrums!!!

Thank you all for the replies!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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