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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2011-09-17 06:13 PM



I hope you didn't write
What I said on your heart
And I hope you understand
That this is tearing me apart

I hope you didn't hear
As I shouted out in despair
All of the things
That I hope you never hear

I hope you didn't listen
As I screamed out in fear
As I was trying not to listen to….
…..what was heard so very clear

I hope you didn’t write
What I said on your heart
And I hope you understand
That this is tearing me apart

I hope you hear me one day tho….
As I say I still love you
Tho I still haven’t a clue why…
I hope you hear me one day
And believe it when I say
I wrote those words I love you
On my heart and there they stay….

~~~kingsangel~~~

© Copyright 2011 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-09-18 03:28 AM


Dear Julie, this is quite beautiful, did read it already at 1am but was too tired to reply.

Your captivating poetic ponderings reflect what happens often to many when we think there are obstacles to the full blooming of love, so we keep it within our heart, where we tend to it until maybe one day we open the little heart door again ...

Enjoyed this very much.

Love,
Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-09-18 08:57 AM


Angel4aKing:

Very adoring write for someone in your past.  Very nice.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2011-09-18 09:52 AM


Excellent write on a well-nigh universal theme. I can relate to this very much. Thanks!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
4 posted 2011-09-18 02:49 PM


Thank you all for your replys and my apologies for taking so long to respond...glad you enjoyed!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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