navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Will I Remain
Open Poetry #47
Post A Reply Post New Topic Will I Remain Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-09-15 07:14 PM



Will I Remain

Midnite
in this City
is not very pretty
when my sweetheart
is thousands of miles away.
What can I say
I'll never know
what made you run away
unless you tell me.
Darling what is your
master plan...
are we still lovers
will I remain
your loving man.

JamesLee
15September
2011


  


  


  


  

© Copyright 2011 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-09-15 07:30 PM


This is so heartfelt and lovely, dear James! I trust she will be back in no time ... and she will explain.

Love,
M

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-09-15 09:02 PM


JamesLee:

Nice write Mr.


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Will I Remain

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary