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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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When the sun rose and dressed the world in subtle shades of gold I was dancing ~ When the rains came and all I knew and loved was completely washed away I was dancing ~ When the flowers bloomed and touched the world with vivid scents and soft petals I was dancing ~ When the world around me crumbled and I knew that nothing would ever be the same again I was dancing ~ I'll be dancing When things are secure or When everything is broken If ever it all changes or If it should remain same I'll be dancing always ~ "I'll tell you how the sun rose A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by MorningStar (09-15-2011 04:50 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a lovely attitude! May you dance into infinity! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Aenean, this is lovely, lovely, LOVELY! I absolutely LOVE it! I would have emailed you about the following, only you haven't made emails available to Pipsters - while you have 24 hours to edit, I just thought I would say that I think you meant the line: "and I knew that nothing would ever the same again" to be: "and I knew that nothing would ever be the same again" If you don't get to edit it in time, or don't want to, it doesn't make your poem any less beautiful, inspiring and absolutely delightful! Owl |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Yes, Morning Star, I say turn off Dancing With The Stars and go out and dance and serenade the real stars! Enjoyed, flash |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Joyful and wise. Great positive attitude! Love, Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
You are so right on to dance thru life, Enjoyed, Your poem MorningStar, Ms. E |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Enjoyed your dancing. Kat >^..^< |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I'll be dancing always" As my dad would say: "Cut a rug, girl." Enjoyed. (Did that bubble ever pop?) JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Sunshine - Thank you! I think I may have been born with my toes tappin! It helps me to stay focused on the joy in life. |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
OWL - Thank you for the spell check. I seem to have this unerring ability to forget to type words... I guess my mind get so excited, it races off and leaves my typing fingers behind! LOL! Aenea "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Flash - Amen to that! Besides why watch someone else's flare and sophistication, when you can corner the market on your own :0 Margherita - thank you! I've recently decided that I don't do negative very well... I know we all have our "down" moments - but I the "up" ones better! Mrs. E - Thank you kindly indeed! My personal moto: If I'm breathing - I'm dancing! J.L - Thank you! As a matter of fact - it did! It got so big before it finally succumbed that I got gum on my eyelashes! LOL! :0 "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My pleasure, Aenea. Yes, I can well understand. Your poetry is so bubbly and happy, that I can just picture your poems just bubbling out on your computer screen, trying to catch up with your mind! Giggles at the conversation JL and you had, about the bubble popping! And smiles too. Oh, and I KEEP forgetting to say that I absolutely love your signature quote - I love Emily Dickinson's poetry, but I don't know the one from which that comes. When I can MAKE time, I am going to google it to enjoy it in full. The quote is such a perfect match for your happy personality. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Oh. Morning Star, this is beautiful. I am saving it for my grandaughter-the dancer. She will love it. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful attitude... your words lift my spirits and make me smile! *S* |
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